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Analysis of the Haiku structure

overcast sky---
he hands out fliers
for a tanning salon

ciel couvert ---
il distribue des prospectus
pour un salon de bronzage


Fred Masarani, USA
cco 2007-10-1

Commentaire.

Opposition
pas de soleil <> salon de bronzage

Keywords

sky urban humour overcast

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

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