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giorno di sole
dalle macerie spunta
un ciuffo d'erba

sunny day
a tuft of grass sprouts
from the rubble

jour ensoleillé
une touffe d'herbes pointe
des décombres


Tarquinio Brodo, Italy
tlp 2009-01-22

Commentaire.

La Vie qui triomphe. Allusion culturelle aussi au haïku de Basho sur les herbes d'été et le rêve des guerriers.

Keywords

Gaza Palestine war rubble

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma : sss029 Something reminds us of the Past.
  Motif : mmm001 - Summer grass and War memories.

Used techniques :

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Vie - Life.

Toute manifestation d'un être pour affirmer sa présence, sa survie, parfois dans un contexte qui lui est défavorable.

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