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Analysis of the Haiku structure

tart raspberries
evening comes earlier
and earlier

tarte aux framboises
le soir vient plus tôt
et plus tôt


Heather Madrone, USA
cco 2011-10-2

Archetype

Le soir, la nuit qui vient, la peur ancienne de l'obscurité, la peur enfantine, la plongée dans l'Inconnu..

Keywords

fruit evening pie

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma : sss032 Enhanced reality.
  Motif : mmm059 - Enhanced feeling.

Used techniques :

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* feuilleté - Multilevel discourse, layered haiku.
Haikus with two (or more) reading levels. A first objective level referring to a situation, another underlying level saying something else. The Chinese are fond of this type of discourse with many levels.

These various levels may be conscious or unconscious.

We find a little bit of this technique consciously applied in the weather haiku. The weather element can be understood as an mention to the weather and as the element that creates the atmosphere of haiku.

The two levels of discourse are conscious and disjointed and well visible in haiku tanka, of which they form the two parts. However, they overlap in the layered haiku.

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Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Nuit - The Night.

La nuit primale, avec son obscurité, ses "dangers", ses mystères et nos peurs millénaires.

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