Analysis of the Haiku structure
Crise mondiale -
deux vieilles carpes
Christophe Jubien, France
économie <> Nature
impermanence Nature <> monde transitoire de l'économie
fureur <> calme
Les carpes peuvent figurer l'impermanence du Monde face à la fragilité des constructions humaines.
Structure of this haiku.
Used techniques :
* feuilleté - Multilevel discourse, layered haiku.
Haikus with two (or more) reading levels. A first objective level referring to a situation, another underlying level saying something else. The Chinese are fond of this type of discourse with many levels.
These various levels may be conscious or unconscious.
We find a little bit of this technique consciously applied in the weather haiku. The weather element can be understood as an mention to the weather and as the element that creates the atmosphere of haiku.
The two levels of discourse are conscious and disjointed and well visible in haiku tanka, of which they form the two parts. However, they overlap in the layered haiku.
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* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny
* trans_S - Transition in the surface discourse.
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