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Analysis of the Haiku structure

lune montante
son ventre lisse
comme un galet


Danièle Duteil, France
cco 2011-10-2

Commentaire.

Similitudes : ventre = galet; lune = ventre de la femme enceinte ; lune = femme; lune montante = enceinte

Keywords

moon woman skin pregnant

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm099 -

Used techniques :


* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)

Archetypes and dialectics

* D_HautBas - Up <> Down.

Une opposition entre ce qui est en Haut et ce qui est en Bas. Par exemple, le ciel et la terre, les étoiles et les lumières de la ville, les nuages et la mer...

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