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Analysis of the Haiku structure

lune montante
son ventre lisse
comme un galet


Danièle Duteil, France
cco 2011-10-2

Commentaire.

Similitude
ventre = galet
lune = ventre de la femme enceinte
lune = femme
lune montante = enceinte

Keywords

moon woman skin

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

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