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Analysis of the Haiku structure

vingt gamins lao
fusils pointés sur leur cible -
au cybercafé


Josette Pellet, Suisse
cco 2011-10-2

Commentaire.

Similitude
guerre <> jeu

Keywords

Laos war child internet humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

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