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Analysis of the Haiku structure

at opposite ends
of the reading room
ex-lovers

aux deux extrêmités
de la salle de lecture
les ex-amants


Peter Brady, Canada
cco 2011-11-1

Commentaire.

Similitude : séparation sentimentale = physique
silence biblio = silence entre eux
lecture <> rien à se dire

Opposition
connaître (étude), chercher <> s'ignorer

Keywords

love parting humour book

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

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