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Analysis of the Haiku structure

despite my assurances
my wife's makeup
thicker

malgré mes assurances
le maquillage de ma femme
plus épais


Peter Brady, Canada
cco 2011-11-1

Commentaire.

Similitude
maquillage = peinture sur vieille chose

Keywords

humour woman

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

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