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Analysis of the Haiku structure

rabbit in the moon
each dog has the last bark
till the next

le lapin dans la lune
chaque chien a le dernier aboiement
jusqu'au suivant


Johannes Manjrekar, India
cco 2011-11-2

Commentaire.

Culturel
Les Américains voient un lièvre dans le motif des mers lunaires.

Keywords

moon dog sound night humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* culturel - Use of external cultural reference.
The haiku is based on an external cultural element, well known by the reader. There is a sharing of an environment (place, situation...) or cultural element (music, painting...) that will seek memories or sensations in the memory and experience of the reader. This device saves a lot of space, nothing else is needed, the effect is achieved by the reader's contribution.

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