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Analysis of the Haiku structure

the metal-edged whistle
of a dove's flight

(ciel nuageux
le sifflement de bord de metal
du vol d'une colombe)

Johannes Manjrekar, India
cco 2011-11-2



metal <> colombe


sky bird sound

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects

At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)

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