Analysis of the Haiku structure
the familiar wail
of a common loon-
your empty chair
le cri familier
d'un huard commun -
ta chaise vide
Billie Wilson, USA
Archetype : le Cri, l'Appel
Similitude : l'appel de l'huard = appel du souvenir
loon bird death chair absence
Structure of this haiku.
Used techniques :
* atmosphere - Atmosphere.
Something emerges from all the elements that constitute haiku: a climate, an atmosphere. The author does not state this explicitly. It is the reader who reconstructs it from his or her own experience.
This is especially true in three-segment haiku, also called "grocery list". But this effect can also be achieved in other ways.
The mention of feelings related to the weather and taste adds a multisensory dimension to the atmosphere created.
* detail - A detail is the key element of the haiku.
The strength of these haikus lies in a detail, either in its relationship to other elements or images, or in its own strength. It plays the active role and will be remembered.
We can recognize there the action of the archetype of the ActivePoint.
* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.
* absence - The main element is not explicit.
The haiku is structured around an unnamed element to which each image refers. The interest is to save the space that would be used by naming the element while having the effect it produces.
The haiku can appear as a vault from which the scaffolding has been removed. If the haiku is well composed, the main element is absent but everything refers to it.
This technique delays storage in memory because the reader must complete the discourse with the unnamed element so that the haiku is unambiguously understandable. It then acquires a higher memory weight.
Archetypes and dialectics
* A_Cri - The Cry.
Le cri. Un être produit un son bref. Sans relation avec les causes de ce cri. Il peut être en relation avec la douleur, la peur, la violence, l'effort. Ce n'est pas nécessairement un appel pour nous.
Parfois relié à l'Appel.
* A_Appel - The Call.
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