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Analysis of the Haiku structure

march warmth
the taste of curry
on his lips

chaleur de mars
le goût du curry
sur ses lèvres


Heather Madrone, USA
cco 2011-11-2

Commentaire.

Similitudes :
épice = amour
chaleur retrouvée = chaleur épice

Keywords

March taste lips love kiss

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)

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