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Analysis of the Haiku structure

wind and rain --
wisteria blooms entwine
the barbed wire fence

vent et pluie --
les fleurs de wisteria se mêlent
à la clôture de barbelés


Heather Madrone, USA
cco 2011-11-2

Commentaire.

Similitude 
froid (pluie) = froid (métal)

Opposition 
froid,dur (metal, pluie) <> fleurs

Keywords

rain wind blooming fence

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

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