Analysis of the Haiku structure
le regard tendu vers la lune
Danièle Duteil, France
poches vides <> lune pleine
proche <> lontain
"Quand on montre la lune du doigt, l'imbécile regarde le doigt"
Structure of this haiku.
Used techniques :
* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny
Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects
At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.
Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures
* culturel - Use of external cultural reference.
The haiku is based on an external cultural element, well known by the reader. There is a sharing of an environment (place, situation...) or cultural element (music, painting...) that will seek memories or sensations in the memory and experience of the reader. This device saves a lot of space, nothing else is needed, the effect is achieved by the reader's contribution.
Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.
At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.
Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)
* S1 - Folded sentence.
Haiku in one folded sentence.
Effects: decod - Decoding the structure.
Affects the time required to understand the speech by the time required to decode the structure. Groups the elements by physical and temporal caesuras.
At the level: 0-form - Formal level
Formal appearance, written forms.
Description level: 1-pres - Formal representation
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