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Analysis of the Haiku structure

shoots of green grain-
old abandoned houses
stand along the highway

pousses d'épeautre-
des vieilles maisons abandonnées
au long de l'autoroute

William Sorlien, USA
cco 2012-05-2


A_Vie A_Chute A_Abandon


highway house

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma : sss001 Overcoming Life.
  Motif : mmm017 - The surviving garden.
Un jardin d'une maison ou un endroit abandonné où la Vie renaît, ou essaie d'attirer l'attention.

Schéma : sss001 Overcoming Life.
  Motif : mmm070 - Outliving plant.

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects

At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious

At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 6-inf - Active infrastructure (archetypes, dialectics)

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