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Analysis of the Haiku structure

hot oil sizzles
on an iron frying pan
kitchen god speaks

l'huile chaude grésille
dans la poêle de fer
le dieu de la cuisine parle


Johannes Manjrekar, India
cco 2012-06-1

Commentaire.

Archetype du petit dieu, ici de la cuisine (lare).

Keywords

smell sound cooking hot

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* multisens - Synestesia - Multi-senses perception.
Haïkus using effects on several senses (hearing, touch, taste, vision, smell). They play on the phenomenon of resonance between feelings (Synesthesia). This device usually produces strong haikus because they are physical.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

* poesie - Use of poetical devices.
Use of poetical devices.

* perso - Personification.
Personification. Projection of human feelings or behaviours on things or animals.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Petitsdieux - LIttle Gods.

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