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Analysis of the Haiku structure

overcast-
curls of smoke
over a shared fence

ciel couvert -
des volutes de fumée
par dessus la cloture


Carole MacRury, USA
cco 2012-06-2

Commentaire.

Similitude : ciel couvert = fumée.

Keywords

overcast humour neighbor

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

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