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Analysis of the Haiku structure

sharp smell
after a noon downpour
electric summer

odeur forte
après l'averse de midi
été électrique


Catbird55, USA
cco 2012-06-2

Commentaire.

Archetype : le Reveil des odeurs de la terre.

Keywords

smell rain thunderstorm

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* multisens - Synestesia - Multi-senses perception.
Haïkus using effects on several senses (hearing, touch, taste, vision, smell). They play on the phenomenon of resonance between feelings (Synesthesia). This device usually produces strong haikus because they are physical.

* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.

* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Reveil - The Awakening, Reliving.

Quelque chose s'éveille, qui était "endormi". Qui renait après une période d'absence. Il se signale.

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