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Analysis of the Haiku structure

storm-washed sky -
the bird songs
clearer

ciel lavé par l'orage -
l'oiseau chante
plus clair


Johannes Manjrekar, India
cco 2012-07-1

Commentaire.

Similtude : clarté ciel et chant oiseau. Archetype du passage (avant et après l'orage les choses sont différentes).

Keywords

sky birdsong

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Passage - The Crossing, the Transition.

Tout ce qui est le passage d'une étape, d'une borne, d'un état à l'autre. Le franchissement d'un col, le passage d'une barrière séparant deux zones. Les ponts, solstices, nouvel-an...

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