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Analysis of the Haiku structure

At rest
in the crow's nest
crescent moon

Au repos
dans le nid de corneilles
le croissant de lune


Alexis Rotella, USA
cco 2013-03-1

Commentaire.

Similitude : lune = oeuf

Keywords

bird moon humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

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