Analysis of the Haiku structure
the practised slice
of a bread knife
le tranchant affuté
d'un couteau à pain
Alan Summers, England
Similitude : créanciers vautours <> couteau
Structure of this haiku.
Used techniques :
* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.
A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.
Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects
At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.
Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)
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