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Analysis of the Haiku structure

zombie debt-
the practised slice
of a bread knife

dette zombie
le tranchant affuté
d'un couteau à pain


Alan Summers, England
cco 2013-03-2

Commentaire.

Similitude : créanciers vautours <> couteau

Keywords

crisis economy

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

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