Analysis of the Haiku structure
St. Patrick's Day
in front of the pub
yellow pouring out of the daffodils
devant le pub
l'effusion de jaune des jonquilles
Alexis Rotella, USA
Opposition : vert (Saint-Patrick) <> jaune (jonquille)
flower color daffodil humour
Structure of this haiku.
Used techniques :
* culturel - Use of external cultural reference.
The haiku is based on an external cultural element, well known by the reader. There is a sharing of an environment (place, situation...) or cultural element (music, painting...) that will seek memories or sensations in the memory and experience of the reader. This device saves a lot of space, nothing else is needed, the effect is achieved by the reader's contribution.
Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.
At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.
Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)
* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny
Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects
At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.
Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures
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