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dawn haze -
the bulbul's trills
so clear

brume du matin -
les trilles du bulbul
si claires


Johannes Manjrekar, India
cco 2013-04-1

Commentaire.

Opposition : brume <> clair

Keywords

dawn birdsong haze sound

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm060 -

Used techniques :

* plus - Enhanced reality.
Something becomes more... A detail is getting stronger.

* detail - A detail is the key element of the haiku.
The strength of these haikus lies in a detail, either in its relationship to other elements or images, or in its own strength. It plays the active role and will be remembered.

We can recognize there the action of the archetype of the ActivePoint.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

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