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Analysis of the Haiku structure

citiso in fiore
gli occhi d'un gatto nero
molto piĆ¹ gialli

cytisus in bloom
a black cat's eyes
much more yellow

cytise en fleurs
les yeux d'un chat noir
beaucoup plus jaunes


Tarquinio Brodo, England
cco 2013-04-1

Commentaire.

Similitude : jaune du cytise et des yeux du chat

Keywords

flower blooming cat color yellow

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* plus - Enhanced reality.
Something becomes more... A detail is getting stronger.

* detail - A detail is the key element of the haiku.
The strength of these haikus lies in a detail, either in its relationship to other elements or images, or in its own strength. It plays the active role and will be remembered.

We can recognize there the action of the archetype of the ActivePoint.

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

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