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Analysis of the Haiku structure

foglia caduta
una formica esplora
quell'astronave

fallen leaf
an ant exploring
that space ship

feuille tombée
une fourmi explore
ce vaisseau spatial


Tarquinio Brodo, England
cco 2013-04-2

Commentaire.

Similitude : feuille = véhicule spatial

Keywords

leaf insect humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

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