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Analysis of the Haiku structure

claquements sur l'eau
les carpes viennent gober
des mouches de brume

Jean-Hugues Chuix, France
cco 2015-11-1


J'aime bien les sonorit├ęs de L1-L2. Et les "mouches de brume".


pond fish fly haze

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* alliteration - Alliteration.
Alliteration: effect of sonorities produced by the repetition of consonants to mimic a situation. Alliteration: consonant effect - Assonance: vowel effect.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects

At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-trait - Style,subject handling

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious

At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 6-inf - Active infrastructure (archetypes, dialectics)

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_PlaneEau - Something hovering over the Water.

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