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Analysis of the Haiku structure

claquements sur l'eau
les carpes viennent gober
des mouches de brume


Jean-Hugues Chuix, France
cco 2015-11-1

Commentaire.

J'aime bien les sonorit├ęs de L1-L2. Et les "mouches de brume".

Keywords

pond fish fly haze

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* alliteration - Alliteration.
Alliteration: effect of sonorities produced by the repetition of consonants to mimic a situation. Alliteration: consonant effect - Assonance: vowel effect.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_PlaneEau - Something hovering over the Water.

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