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Analysis of the Haiku structure

neige à la fenêtre
comme la vapeur du thé
son dos nu

Vincent Hoarau, France
cco 2015-11-2


La force de ce haïku provient de l'originalité et de la richesse des juxtapositions. Oppositions chaud-froid couleurs: thé-neige vapeur-neige Richesse du non-dit, donc de ce que le lecteur va ajouter de son vécu. Haiku multisensuel (vue, toucher, odeur).


snow tea cup window erotic

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects

At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)

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