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parc en hiver
le manège illuminé tourne
sans enfants


Philippe Bréham, France
cco 2015-12-2

Commentaire.

Image un peu fantômatique et pour tout dire sinistre. Je la vois même en noir et blanc. Elle est aussi inquiétante car pourquoi ce manège tourne-t-il seul ? Où sont les enfants ? Il évoque un peu le piège qui attire les insectes dans la nuit. Construction basée sur l'opposition entre la Vie (les enfants et leurs cris, la Lumière) et la Mort (vide, hiver, silence, froid, l'obscurité).
Archétype de la Lumière qui brille dans la nuit. Sabi de l'objet qui a vécu.

Keywords

park fair light silence

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* sabi - Sabi
The sabi is a concept of Japanese aesthetics, derived from Zen Buddhist concepts, linked to the feeling created by the alteration by time, the decrepitude of aging things, the patina of objects, the mark of Time. The charm of things that have lived (Vintage des Américains).

Are sabi: Used steps from an old staircase, worn clothing, a rusty railing, a patinated knob...

In connection with Sabi-wabi.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Japanese_aesthetics

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* fin - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_LumiereNuit - The Light in the Night.

Tout ce qui apparait au propre comme au figuré comme une lumière dans la nuit. Un espoir, le bout du tunnel. Un abri. Le phare. La survivance d'une chose noyée dans un univers "hostile".

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