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tempête de neige -
qui a secoué la boule
de ce ciel de verre ?


Ben Coudert, France
cco 2016-01-1

Commentaire.

Haïku "facile" de prime abord, basé sur la similitude de comportement de la "neige". Amusant aussi même si tout le monde a pensé cela au moins une fois. Pourtant, il est porté par des archétypes : la mise en abyme, le monde en miniature. Il parle à notre Imaginaire. Et si notre monde était comme une boule de verre ? Lire et relire Bachelard. Voilà donc un haïku simple qui ne l'est pas.

Keywords

snow humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Archetypes and dialectics

* D_GrandPetit - Big <> Little.

* A_Miniature - The Miniature.

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