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Analysis of the Haiku structure

just west of dawn
an earful of geese
heading south

juste à l'ouest de l'aube
une engueulade d'oies
partant vers le sud


Sandi Pray, USA
cco 2016-01-1

Commentaire.

Pour info, lors de vol nocturne, les oies crient pour garder le contact.

Keywords

goose bird migration dawn sound

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Route - The Road, the journey.

* A_Sauvage - The Wildness, Freedom.

Le monde sauvage en opposition avec notre vie de tous les jours.

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