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Analysis of the Haiku structure

nuit d'Épiphanie
ce rêve étrange envolé
aux premières lueurs


Danièle Duteil, France
cco 2016-01-1

Commentaire.

Haïku très ouvert à toutes interprétations. Il va ainsi laisser une trace longue dans notre mémoire car le sujet n'est pas résolu. On reste intrigué et l'objet ne se range pas immédiatement en mémoire. Ce type d'ouverture finale est une technique efficace pour augmenter les chances que le haïku soit retenu par le lecteur.

Keywords

Epiphany dream morning

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* yugen - Yugen.
Yugen is a concept of Japanese aesthetics that can be expressed as deep, mysterious, dark, troubled.... In criticism of Japanese poetry, he expresses a subtle depth of things that are vaguely evoked in the poem.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)


* xxx - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)


* absence - Undefined appeal.
Haïku having something undefinable that deserves further study.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-strp - Deep structure (schemas, patterns, cultural, associations, similarities)


* mémoire - Memory active element.
The driving force behind this type of haiku seems to be a memory that reappears.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-aut - Author's role

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