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Analysis of the Haiku structure

UNCOS: weir! weir! -
ootby
a bleckie brustin wi sang

NEWS: war! war! -
outside
a blackbird bursting with song

NOUVELLES : guerre ! guerre ! -
dehors
le chant soudain d'un merle


John McDonald, Scotland (UK)
cco 2016-01-1

Commentaire.

Haïku bâti sur des oppositions : notre monde et celui des oiseaux, LES bruits de guerre et le chant d'UN oiseau. Le mot "soudain" marque l'irruption d'une image de paix, de vie dans un tumulte. C'est un peu le sauveur. A remarquer aussi, une similitude-opposition entre le merle noir et la colombe blanche de la paix.

Keywords

war bird birdsong humour news

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures


* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 6-inf - Active infrastructure (archetypes, dialectics)


* soudain - Sudden modification.
The haiku describes a sudden, sometimes unexpected event. He grabs something that just happened. It appears as a transition between two states: before and after.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Frontiere - The Frontier, the Boundary between two domains.


* A_Mort - Death.

Contexte de mort (deuil, décès, cimetière...) ou pulsion de mort (guerre, violence...).

* D_Nature - Nature versus Domesticated.


* D_VieMort - Life <> Death.

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