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Analysis of the Haiku structure

on the spent firework casing
new year's day

sur les restes d'un feu d'artifices
jour du nouvel an

David Serjeant, UK
cco 2016-01-1


Toujours très efficace l'opposition du givre (froid et blanc) et des cendres (noires) d'un feu (coloré). A remarquer, une structure en 21.


frost fireworks new_year

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects

At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures

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