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notte inoltrata
in silenzio il silenzio
si fa più buio

in the middle of the night
silently the silence
becomes darker

au milieu de la nuit
dans le silence le silence
se fait plus noir


Moussia Fantoli, Italy
cco 2016-01-2

Commentaire.

A mettre en relation avec le "vent noir" que l'on retrouve quelque fois en poésie. Autre utilisation de "plus" qui indique une modification de la perception.

Keywords

silence night

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm059 -

Used techniques :

* plus - Enhanced reality.
Something becomes more... A detail is getting stronger.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* avis - Opinion given by the author.
The author tells his/her views or an explanation. The speech is not neutral at the first level of reading/writing. This is not a haiku where the author explains to the reader what he or she should understand, usually completed and of no interest. Here, the author gives an indication that is part of the elements of the discourse in addition to the others and that is not a redundancy (redundancy, precision, explanation).

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Nuit - The Night.

La nuit primale, avec son obscurité, ses "dangers", ses mystères et nos peurs millénaires.

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