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Analysis of the Haiku structure

closet renovation--
removing all her clothes
she nails the carpenter

rénovation du placard--
en retirant tous ses vêtements
elle encloue le menuisier


Carol Raisfeld, USA
cco 2016-01-2

Commentaire.

Ah ! Carol !... L'efficacité de minimalisme. Avec son écriture, c'est presque toujours comme un flash dans la nuit.

Keywords

erotic fruit

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :


* jeu_mots - Puns.
A pun, a double meaning word without being a pivot. This is often an occasion for a multi-level reading discourse with double meaning words. This device is linked to humour, to the comic of the situation.

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 5-vecu - Personal(Experienced, psycho, acquired...)

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