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Analysis of the Haiku structure

après la neige
Comme deux ailes d'une mouette
les tentes des émigrants


Mohamad Alsari, Syria
cco 2016-02-1

Commentaire.

Plusieurs liens très forts. La couleur blanche lie la neige, les ailes de la mouette, le blanc qui devrait signaler les lieux de refuge. Un lien aussi entre mouette (libre et en vol) et l'émigrant qui veut partir et reste fixé sur le sol. Image de la liberté de l'oiseau. Opposition entre le vol de l'oiseau et la fixité du camp de réfugiés. Ce haïku est pour moi une image onirique comme celles du dessinateur Folon. L'envol tant rêvé.

Keywords

thaw war Syria refugee

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

* analogie - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

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