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Analysis of the Haiku structure

gouttes bruyantes
pas feutrés dans l'escalier
l'imprimante ronronne


Didier Bretin, France
cco 2016-02-1

Commentaire.

Haïku en "liste de commissions". Efficace car il relie des bruits en opposition d'une ligne à l'autre. Il faut remarquer l'effet dynamique de zoom entre l'extérieur, et l'intérieur. Un effet rare.

Keywords

sound rain

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma : sss023 Living Objects.
  Motif : mmm002 - Computers and storm

Used techniques :


* S3 - Three elements haiku.
Three independent elements compose the haiku. Also known as the grocery list.

Effects: reinter - Reworking at the end.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures


* progression - Advance.
Structure with a spatial or time oriented advance.

Effects: reinter - Reworking at the end.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures


* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

Effects: liadyn - Binding with dynamics effects


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures

Archetypes and dialectics

* D_IntExt - In <> Out.


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