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Analysis of the Haiku structure

au bout du rocher
dérangée dans mon zazen
par un orage


Denise Therriault-Ruest, Canada
cco 2016-02-1

Commentaire.

Haïku construit sur l'opposition entre calme et fureur. Le rocher agit comme un ancrage dans la solidité tranquille.

Keywords

zazen thunderstorm humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

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