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Analysis of the Haiku structure

un gin bien chaud
avec un zeste de citron
vent de tempête


Denise Therriault-Ruest, Canada
cco 2016-02-1

Commentaire.

Haïku construit sur des oppositions emboîtées. L1 et L2 sur le goût. L12 et L3 sur le confort par rapport à l'inconfort du dehors. Le grog est chaud et il fait froid dehors. La quiétude et la tempête.

Keywords

alcool wind taste storm

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm016 -

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.

Archetypes and dialectics

* D_ChaudFroid - Warm <> Cold.

* D_IntExt - In <> Out.

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