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Analysis of the Haiku structure

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Michel Duflo, France
cco 2016-02-1

Commentaire.

Haïku humoristique, amusant. Mais il peut aussi, à l'insu de son auteur, contenir une vision plus glaçante. Il me fait penser à Psychose. Cette scène de film était peut-être tapie, prête à se manifester lorsque l'auteur a écrit innocemment ce haïku. Méfiez-vous de votre Inconscient et de ce qu'il regarde par vos yeux...

Keywords

humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* detail - A detail is the key element of the haiku.
The strength of these haikus lies in a detail, either in its relationship to other elements or images, or in its own strength. It plays the active role and will be remembered.

We can recognize there the action of the archetype of the ActivePoint.

* culturel - Use of external cultural reference.
The haiku is based on an external cultural element, well known by the reader. There is a sharing of an environment (place, situation...) or cultural element (music, painting...) that will seek memories or sensations in the memory and experience of the reader. This device saves a lot of space, nothing else is needed, the effect is achieved by the reader's contribution.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* psycho - Haiku with a psychological background.
Haiku can have a reading level that expresses an underlying psychological situation that is still active. It is not sure if this analysis is accurate. It can simply exist in the reader's mind. It is almost always absent from the author's intention, as can be seen from the author's request for information.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Mort - Death.

Contexte de mort (deuil, décès, cimetière...) ou pulsion de mort (guerre, violence...).

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