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Analysis of the Haiku structure

on my smartphone
mount fuji in the sunset
morning coffee ---

sur mon smartphone
le mont fuji au soleil couchant
café du matin


Bill Bilquin, Belgique
cco 2016-02-1

Commentaire.

Dérision, humour. Et aussi l'archétype du Microcosme (le Monde dans ma main). A noter aussi l'opposition entre le soir (couchant) et le matin. Peut-être aussi entre le thé (Japon) et le café.

Keywords

coffee morning humour telephone smartphone

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.

As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.

* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Miniature - The Miniature.

* T_Immobile - Frozen Time.

* - Frozen Time.

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