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Analysis of the Haiku structure

Après le bombardement
d'une ouverture dans le toit
Je médite à la lune


Mohamad Alsari, Syria
cco 2016-02-2

Commentaire.

Basho a écrit un haïku similaire. Il contient l'idée que l'esprit s'évade d'une réalité dure et s'élève vers la Lumière.

Keywords

war Syria bombing humour

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* culturel - Use of external cultural reference.
The haiku is based on an external cultural element, well known by the reader. There is a sharing of an environment (place, situation...) or cultural element (music, painting...) that will seek memories or sensations in the memory and experience of the reader. This device saves a lot of space, nothing else is needed, the effect is achieved by the reader's contribution.

* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.

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