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Analysis of the Haiku structure

rock and roll métal…
dans la nuit une canette
roulée par le vent


André Cayrel, France
cco 2016-02-2

Commentaire.

Haïku basé sur le jeux de mots. Il faut cependant remarquer le fait que les sons miment la situation, surtout en L1.

Keywords

sound night street urban

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* jeu_mots - Puns.
A pun, a double meaning word without being a pivot. This is often an occasion for a multi-level reading discourse with double meaning words. This device is linked to humour, to the comic of the situation.

* culturel - Use of external cultural reference.
The haiku is based on an external cultural element, well known by the reader. There is a sharing of an environment (place, situation...) or cultural element (music, painting...) that will seek memories or sensations in the memory and experience of the reader. This device saves a lot of space, nothing else is needed, the effect is achieved by the reader's contribution.

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