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Analysis of the Haiku structure

la banque
commence à disparaître
~ magnolia en fleurs


Vincent Hoarau, France
cco 2016-02-2

Commentaire.

Opposition forte entre la banque (dure réalité du monde oppressant) et les fleurs qui sont la Vie colorée et fragile. A remarquer la pause rare en début de L3. L3 pourrait apparaître comme "l'explication donnée" par l'auteur, au cas où on ne comprendrait pas mais cette pause, en créant une légère temporisation, efface cette interpétation.

Keywords

economy tree blooming magnolia

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.

* T3 - Stalling at the beginning of L3.
Stalling at the beginning of L3.

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Vie - Life.

Toute manifestation d'un être pour affirmer sa présence, sa survie, parfois dans un contexte qui lui est défavorable.

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