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winter bleak
under the rail bridge
graffiti blooms

hiver sombre
sous le pont de chemin de fer
les fleurs des graffiti


Mark Holloway, UK
cco 2016-02-2

Commentaire.

Autre haïku archétypal basé sur "La Vie qui triomphe". L3 fonctionne aussi sur le double sens du mot "fleurs". Fleurs -> fleurir. Oppositions entre hiver et printemps, entre sombre et couleurs, entre endroit sordide et beauté.

Keywords

graffiti blooming color train bridge

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma :
  Motif : mmm053 -

Used techniques :

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Vie - Life.

Toute manifestation d'un être pour affirmer sa présence, sa survie, parfois dans un contexte qui lui est défavorable.

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