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Analysis of the Haiku structure

winter rain --
the dog and I
exchange sighs

pluie d'hiver --
le chien et moi
échangeons des soupirs


Paul David Mena, USA
cco 2016-02-2

Commentaire.

Un haïku bâti sur la structure de l'échange des regards entre êtres souvent différents. Il dit cet instant infime où quelque chose passe entre eux, au delà de leur différence (ici, un homme et un chien). Mais il y plus ici, c'est l'instant des possibles. Ce chien sous la pluie est en attente de refuge, de sécurité. Quelque chose peut basculer pour lui. Le haïku est efficace pour noter ces moments-là.

Keywords

rain winter dog

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma : sss020 The Encounter.
  Motif : mmm007 - Everyone looks at the other.

Used techniques :


* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

Effects: liainc - Binding to the Unconscious


At the level: 2-prof - Deep level
Deep and non explicit structures, active objects of the unconscious.

Description level: 6-inf - Active infrastructure (archetypes, dialectics)


* union - Union between author and subject.
A link, union, between the author and a being, animal or thing. Empathy.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-aut - Author's role


* auteur - Presence of the author.
Presence of the author in the haiku, the author stages himself but does not necessarily speak about him.

Effects: liavec - Binding to the reader's experience.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 3-aut - Author's role

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Rencontre - The Unexpected Encounter.

La rencontre fortuite entre deux êtres avec un moment où quelque chose se passe entre eux.

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