tempslibres - free times haiku database

Analysis of the Haiku structure

insomnie -
le chat fait des allers-retours
à la fenêtre


Denise Dudon, France
cco 2016-03-1

Commentaire.

L'image de l'insomnie, c'est souvent quelque chose qui se promène la nuit. Ici, c'est le chat.

Keywords

insomnia cat night

Structure of this haiku.

Schema and motifs :

Schéma : sss013 Insomnia and something's happening.
  Motif : mmm036 - Insomnia and movements.

Used techniques :


* détail - A detail is the key element of the haiku.
The strength of these haikus lies in a detail, either in its relationship to other elements or images, or in its own strength. It plays the active role and will be remembered.

We can recognize there the action of the archetype of the ActivePoint.

Effects: reinter - Reworking at the end.


At the level: 1-surf - Surface level
Discourse, surface structures, content, subject, style.

Description level: 2-strs - Organization, surface structures

All the author's haikus >>>