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Analysis of the Haiku structure

champ boueux
la chanson gaie des enfants
du camp bohémien


André Cayrel, France
cco 2016-03-1

Commentaire.

Haïku bâti sur l'opposition entre la boue et la vie (du chant des enfants). C'est aussi la Vie qui triomphe. Et pourquoi pas un avatar de l'image Zen du Lotus qui fleurit sur l'eau boueuse.

Keywords

mud song child

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* opposition - Images in opposition.
Images with a group of opposite senses. The images are in opposition to each other. However, the opposite semes are grouped into dialectics. A dialectic is composed of opposite semes, like the two sides, poles of the same grade.

For example:
- Top and Bottom.
- Inside and Outside
- Big and Tiny

* archetype - Active archetypes.
Active presence of archetypes that have determined relationships between images. These archetypes are structures that have aggregated seeds (meanings) and are patterns inherited from the collective unconscious. These are the models that we use to organize our perception of the World.

* fin - Final element give the clue.
A detail at the end reveals the real meaning of haiku.

Archetypes and dialectics

* A_Vie - Life.

Toute manifestation d'un être pour affirmer sa présence, sa survie, parfois dans un contexte qui lui est défavorable.

* A_Voyage - The Travel.

Le voyage, la migration... Lié à la Route qui elle est plus en potentialités que le Voyage qui est action.

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