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Analysis of the Haiku structure

réchauffement climatique
les bras velus
de la bibliothécaire


Jean-Claude César, France
cco 2016-03-1

Commentaire.

Un coup de chaleur ! Le comique est basé sur le double sens de réchauffement. Elle doit donc en avoir du tempérament. Voilà un haïku qui passe bien en disant sans dire explicitement. Cette technique peut aussi être utilisée pour les haïkus engagés, afin de dire le "message" par la bande.

Keywords

humour erotic climate woman

Structure of this haiku.

Used techniques :

* simili - Similitudes.
Use of images with common semes. The sharing of common semes (qualities, characteristics) makes images reinforce each other. There is resonance because the mind makes the relationship between the two images.

A cup of tea and a lake share the fact that they are an expanse of liquid surrounded by a rim. We can "see" the image of one in the other.

* jeu_mots - Puns.
A pun, a double meaning word without being a pivot. This is often an occasion for a multi-level reading discourse with double meaning words. This device is linked to humour, to the comic of the situation.

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