Analysis of the Haiku structure
for the fire truck
pour le camion de pompiers
Paul David Mena, USA
Juxtaposition inattendue. Opposition aussi entre un bruit et un silence. Ce haïku note une transition brutale, un changement soudain que l'auteur a perçu.
Structure of this haiku.
Used techniques :
* soudain - Sudden modification.
The haiku describes a sudden, sometimes unexpected event. He grabs something that just happened. It appears as a transition between two states: before and after.
* S21 - Caesura between L2 and L3.
Caesura between L2 and L3.
* juxtaposition - Juxtaposition.
Use of images placed side by side to create an effect superior to that of each separate image. It is not a resonance effect as in similarity but rather a composition effect as in a painting or still life.
As the juxtaposed images have no or very few common semes, they compose a new global image in relation to its components.
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